A gem of writing in a film review
"Whiteout" New York Post: Kyle Smith
Hey, screenwriters — all four of you: Did you skip the first day of writing class, the one where they write on the blackboard, “Show, don’t tell”? If I’d wanted weather on the ones, I would have stayed home and watched Pat Kiernan.
It's called exposition, and you've got to get it right.
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Patrick Sweeney at 10:27 PM
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Stone altar crushes man in Austrian parish: Catholic Culture
An Austrian man who prayed for deliverance when he was trapped in an elevator, and then went to a Viennese parish to thank God after his prayer was answered, was crushed to death when a stone altar fell on him. “He seems to have embraced a stone pillar on which the stone altar was perched and it fell on him, killing him instantly,” said a police spokesman.
God had second thoughts.
It's real but it reads like a rejected Twilight Zone script.
Labels: accident, church
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Patrick Sweeney at 8:34 PM
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Observing the President as a former high-school orator
Obama 9/11 speeches today seemed passionless and bland. He used none, zero, of his rhetorical skills in his first of 4 (or 8) anniversaries of the terrorist attacks on lower Manhattan and the United States.
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Patrick Sweeney at 8:02 PM
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A very strange debate, indeed
In 40 years of paying attention to politics (I'm 55 by the way), I've never seen this obsession with the debaters and the meta-debate, as opposed to just talking about the issues:
Is there actually an Obama health care plan?
What are the motives of the people opposed to the current plan (HR 3200)?
Who's lying?
Are abortions covered?
Are illegals covered?
What is the number of the uninsured 20? 40? 60 million?
How many of the uninsured have single or joint income exceeding 75,000?
Is Medicare broke or going broke?
My bottom line, the promoters of Obamacare won't be candid, honest, transparent, truthful, etc. The most obvious indicator was the haste they tried and will try to get this passed.
Labels: obama, politics, pro-life
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Patrick Sweeney at 7:55 PM
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